Antidote to dullness

 I was reading the May 18 2026 print issue of The Christian Science Monitor. Pages 40-41 feature a poem by e.e. cummings (1894-1962) and an essay by Todd R. Nelson. 

The poem is just wonderful. Here it is:

in Just-

spring     when the world is mud-

luscious the little

lame balloonman

whistles     far      and wee

and eddieandbill come

running from marbles and

piracies and it's 

spring

when the world is puddle-wonderful

the queer

old balloonman whistles

far     and     wee

and bettyandisbel come dancing

from hop-scotch and jump rope and

it's

spring

and

    the

      goat-footed

balloonMan     whistles

far

and wee

In the accompanying essay, Todd Nelson describes his first encounter with this poem in the seventh grade. He writes: "I look back on that poem as a starting line. I heard the call to poetry... I began to understand that a poet is describing the world, experience, or concepts in a way that antidotes dullness, commonness, and indifference; that stretches the possibilities of language; that sings and beckons. A poem is a discrete vessel of clarity and understanding."

Have a puddle-wonderful day!

Julie Swannell

Woman's Rights

 Some years ago in Queensland the Premier’s wife, Florence Bjelke-Petersen, was elected to be a Senator in the Federal Parliament. 

She was a religious person, and I felt she would need spiritual support in taking on this responsibility. She was more famous for her Pumpkin Scones than her politics!

So I sent her a copy of Mary Baker Eddy’s poem Woman’s Rights. Here are the words:

WOMAN’S RIGHTS

Grave on her monumental pile:

She won from vice, by virtue’s smile,

Her dazzling crown, her sceptred throne,

Affection’s wreath, a happy home;

 

The right to worship deep and pure,

To bless the orphan, feed the poor;

Last at the cross to mourn her Lord,

First at the tomb to hear his word:

 

To fold an angel’s wings below;

And hover o’er the couch of woe;

To nurse the Bethlehem babe so sweet,

The right to sit at Jesus’ feet;

 

To form the bud for bursting bloom,

The hoary head with joy to crown;

In short, the right to work and pray,

“To point to heaven and lead the way.”

Mary Baker Eddy, Miscellaneous Writings 1883-1896, pp. 388:14 - 389:4

I had a very gracious reply from Mrs. Bjelke-Petersen in which she acknowledged Mrs. Eddy’s place. I am sorry that I didn’t keep a record of that reply.

Joyce Voysey

Immediate Action

"The thread that traces the history of man's worship of God is spun of many strands. One of the longest, perhaps the strongest, is poetry." – from the Forward to Ideas on Wings (Christian Science Publishing Society, 1978)

One poem that has inspired and encouraged me is by Marcella Krisel. I'll share the first half here, but I would encourage you to find it on jsh-online.com or ask for a copy from your local Christian Science Reading Room.

Believe me—it wasn't easy

by Marcella Krisel from The Christian Science Journal, January 1977

---

For far too long
I played host to a problem
That I thought was up to me to solve.
I wrestled with it daily—
Denouncing, entreating, resenting it.
Unfortunately, it thrived
On all this attention
And the free room and board.
Finally, at a particularly low point
Of human discouragement
I was spurred into immediate
Action of a different sort
By a flash of insight:

"I can of mine own self do nothing."** 

....

The Christian Science textbook, Science and Health with Key to the Scriptures by Mary Baker Eddy encourages us: “Individuals are consistent who, watching and praying, can “run, and not be weary; . . . walk, and not faint,” who gain good rapidly and hold their position, or attain slowly and yield not to discouragement.” (SH 254:2–6)

Julie Swannell

*See posts on Ideas on Wings (available in most CS Reading Rooms) from August 2016 - here's a link.

** John 5:30

A holy air

 I was talking with a friend earlier this evening when she burst out with the first few lines of a hymn from the Christian Science Hymnal with such fervour it almost took my breath away.

    "A holy air is breathing round" she began.

    "A fragrance from above" she continued.

We looked it up in the hymn book and found it is number 4!

We completed the verse:

    "Be every thought from sense unbound, / Be every action love."

The joy of the verse spilling out from my friend reminded me of a time, some years ago, when our little congregation in Sydney substituted the recitation of a poem for the usual sung solo in the Sunday church service. The result was uplifting and much appreciated.

The words of the hymn, called "Pater Noster" - "Our Father" - are by Dr. Abiel Abbot Livermore (1811-1892). The very useful Concordance to Christian Science Hymnal and Hymnal Notes (available in most Christian Science Reading Rooms) explains that Dr. Livermore "was a Unitarian minister of Keene, New Hampshire, who later became president of the Theological School at Meadville, Pennsylvania."'

The music, by Dr. Percy C. Buck, employs a "free rhythm melody". Dr. Buck "believed that here was an opportunity to advance the music [at Harrow, where he taught] beyond the square-cut form of the conventional hymn tune" (ibid p 177). "After he left Harrow Dr. Buck found that many of his old boys remembered these tunes and even asked to include them in other hymn books" (ibid).

This might encourage congregations to have a new look at Dr. Buck's hymns. And to revisit hymn 4! Thank you DJ.

Julie Swannell

Sympathy

 I’m reacquainting myself with a wonderful poem in Mary Baker Eddy’s autobiographical work Retrospection and Introspection. 

The poem begins:

Ask God to give thee skill

In comfort’s art:

That thou may’st consecrated be

It appears on page 95, and although Mrs. Eddy does not name the poem, I can state that it is called “Sympathy”.

 

Mrs. Eddy gives the name of the poet as A. E. Hamilton. Last year I read Ron Chernow’s biography of Alexander Hamilton, one of the Founding Fathers of the United States of America, and noted that he wrote poetry, so I wondered if this poem could possibly have been written by him. (The title of the book is simply Alexander Hamilton. It is a very fine read indeed. And there is a musical Alexander Hamilton!!)

 

As I have written next to the poem in my copy of Prose Works (by Mary Baker Eddy), my research told me that Alexander Hamilton did not write it. Annie Hamilton did. And that Annie was from Dublin, Ireland, and that her dates were 1843-1875. She died at Castle Hamilton, County Cavan, Ireland. She published under initials only.

 

And now I cannot verify that information through the internet!!

 

How the student of Christian Science yearns to be given the “...skill / In comfort’s art”, spoken of in the poem. He knows so well that “...comforters are needed much / Of Christlike touch.”

 

Let us never stop yearning for such skill. And appreciating the wonderful poem.

Joyce Voysey

Outcome and income

Many poems have helped me over the years. One is called “Mind’s outcome: income” by Steven Alan Avey, published in the May 1979 issue of The Christian Science Journal.

The poem employs a lovely rhythm and repetition that invite me to press on to the next idea and are helpful in memorizing. It also employs all seven synonyms for God found in the Christian Science textbook (Science and Health with Key to the Scriptures by Mary Baker Eddy). This encourages the reader to continue on to see the role of each of those synonyms in working out that our income is Mind’s outcome – what Mr. Avey calls “usable ideas that develop themselves into action”. I love this!

I couldn’t quite remember the name of this poem and thought it used the word “outgo”. (It doesn’t; it uses “outcome” instead.) Anyway in my search on jsh-online.com I found a lovely idea that seems relevant to the topic of income. Writing in the Christian Science Sentinel, 29 Jan 1979, Geoffrey Barratt states that “there is no "fixed income," because the "outgo" from God is not limited, the infinite good that floods from eternal Love is not frozen” (More than ‘millionaires’).

We can’t print Avey’s entire poem here, so here’s a morsel:

Mind’s outcome: income

Steven Alan Avey

Yield to Spirit, and

in come usable ideas

that develop themselves

into action.

 

Look to Love, and

practice kinder ways

of caring for yourself

and your community…

I hope everyone can read the whole poem and perhaps pop a copy up on their fridge, where it sat in our family home for many years.

Do you have a favourite poem? Please share it with us.

Julie Swannell

How Jesus loved his audience

Here is one of my favourite poems from the Christian Science periodicals. I pray with this poem when my church has a Christian Science lecture, as it did last Sunday.  

The poem is from the April 1971 issue of The Christian Science Journal:

IN THE MORNING, IN THE SUN By Doris Peel

I love that we have the privilege of knowing, as expressed in the poem, that newcomers are 

"...drawn

by someone who knew about them

what no man ever had known before."

How Jesus loved his audience.  

 Joyce Voysey   

Ed. Dear readers, we are hoping you will be able to access jsh-online to read the poem, because sadly, we can't quote it in full. There is much free content on this site, and non-subscribers can further access several articles or poems each month for free, we believe. Those who do not yet subscribe, are invited to contact their local Christian Science Reading Room librarian, who will be very happy to send you a free copy of this beautiful poem. By the way, trial subscriptions are free. 

Mrs. Eddy's poems: prayerful driving companions

The other day I was driving to the Gold Coast to attend a Christian Science lecture. It's a 90 minute drive if the traffic flowing nicely - it was! ☺ 

I didn't feel like listening to anything, and wanted to pray, so I decided to sing the hymns that have words by Mary Baker Eddy.

After a while I stopped singing and just recited the words. Slowly and thoughtfully. It was a joy and so uplifting.

Readers probably know there are 7 of Mrs. Eddy's poems set to music in our hymn books.

I grew up with them. One of my Sunday school teachers gave me a pamphlet with the those words in them. I'm not sure how old I was. (Gift idea: Hymn books make a welcome gift for those of all ages! Check out the stock in your local Christian Science Reading Room.) I soon learnt them by heart and they have come to my rescue many times. I also learnt to recognize the hymn numbers for these and other special hymns, at least those in the 1932 hymnal - I have yet to come to grips with the numbers in the "new" hymn book.

Here are the titles and introductory lines of those 7 poems:

"Christmas Morn" - Blest Christmas morn, though murky clouds / Pursue thy way

"Love" - Brood o'er us with Thy shelt'ring wing / 'Neath which our spirits blend / Like brother birds

"Satisfied" - It matters not what be thy lot / So Love doth guide

"Mother's Evening Prayer" - O gentle presence, peace and joy and power

"Christ, my Refuge" - O'er waiting harpstrings of the mind / There sweeps a strain

"Communion Hymn" - Saw ye my Saviour? Heard ye the glad sound?

"Feed my Sheep" - Shepherd, show me how to go / O'er the hillside steep

The Mary Baker Eddy Library has an excellent page about the background of these hymns. You might like to guess which hymn was written first...it's in the MBEL article.

Also on the MBE Library site is a page of research regarding the frequency of having Mrs. Eddy's poems - as hymns or solos - in church services.

What is sure is that each word and each line of these poems is a healing prayer.

Julie Swannell